Assignment 4 (Part 2 Critique)

Horizontal shift & linespacing Critique

This design will be more beneficial with different sized fonts, though I should utilize more white space.

Horizontal shift & stroke weights Critique

There was too much bold emphasis.  The inverting idea is interesting since it eliminates the density of the design and keeps the separation and main points there.

Linespacing & stroke weights Critique

There was again too much bold in this design.  Perhaps I’ll use spacing to do the main separation job.

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